So. Wow.
I think I am going to go do a dance of joy, or maybe cry.
Aye.
OK so DISCLAIMER: I used lines and scenes from Sozins Comet part 1 and 2 for this! Whenever she flashes to suki, and the agni kai and pre-agni kai stuff is straight from. Otherwise it would be wrong. and i wouldn't like that. I didn't mean any plagiarizing, see, here I'm giving credit!! :)
So yeah, pretty much she just kept flashing to Suki. This was mainly for the ending scene. everything pretty much happened the same except for a few key points:
-Sokka didn't kiss Suki when they were leaving the airship. He just smiled at her, in a friendly way.
-Kya and Hitomi took the lightning out of Zuko, which enabled Kya and Katara to heal the wound right up, without any other after effects. (it seemed a bit easy to me in the show... i mean it took spirit water to revive aang!)
-Ozai died. See, he was really fine. just kinda weak from having his bending taken away, but still as strong as any normal, slightly tired, man. Then he stabbed Suki with his belt buckle thing, so Sokka chopped his head off. this makes me so very much happier. I hate Ozai alive.
-Suki died. Ok, so honestly I like Suki. She is a cool character. But she and sokka are too hard to write, like how they aren't together. :/ so, I had to kill her. please note, she didn't die just from Ozai's flame ornament. That probably wouldn't be enough to kill her. She lost a lot of blood, passed out, and fell off the column thing. :)
-oh and I solved the worst problem I had with this story. How quickly Taang and Zutara happened. Don't get me wrong, I love both of them, but they happened WAY too easily. more will be explained next chapter! :)
so... yep. I was kinda annoyed with how un-involved Li was (sorry leiler-buddy!) but I wasn't going to go back and re-write. it had already taken me ?two? weeks to write this! :)
TRANSLATIONS
Issho Ojusan - Bridesmaids... I believe it literally means Bride and Maid or young woman. :)
Inotowok - isolated, alone
tuwawi! - quick!
ingiarsiwok - Passes beyond
auksarpok - plunges through the air
kamitpok - extinguishes fire
tartok - dark (is without light)
illulikangitok - inside ourselves is empty
niptaitok - foggy (is)
ikkuma manigutiwok... ikkiertok - fire submits. feels cold
:D
~LS
3 comments:
I think Suji's death was the first time I actaully felt like crying... Way to go Lu!! You built up that perfec sense of hopelessness!!!!!
wow! thanks! I personally kinda thought it sucked... so it means a lot for you to say that! whoopee!
OHKAY. REALLY FANTASTIC CHAPTER. and its k. i actually in the middle was like screaming "I CANT TAKE THE SUSPENSE!!!" and i had to walk away and calm down before going back to reading :) anyway its k. i really really liked it. especially sokka. god i love him.
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