As you can imagine, I have a whole story's worth of things to say about this chapter. But, really, since I can't sit there next to you and give you a running commentary, I don't have that much! :D
I love love love the letters idea. I kinda, sorta, not really but almost got the idea from a fic i read which I can't remember the name of right now. But I'll remember eventually! :D
in fact, I got so caught up with the letters that it was really hard for me to go back to writing dialouge haha. :D
SO this chapter is pretty epic. it is of epic proportions anyway. hee hee.
*sigh*
hahah, Sera wanted Zuzu to play the Tsungi Horn.So, I got them all drunk. hee hee. :D
OH and the name Yuuchi (pronouced somewhat like 'yoo-ee-chee' but with the 'ee' barely noticible.) I asked her 'what would you name your first child' and she's like, 'boy = yuuchi!' :D
OH and Liluye's thing may be a bit unbelievable, but really think about it. Sokka and katara really would have made an impression on Chief arnook, not to mention Aang. And, since Yue is gone, he would need an heir (although, admittedly, he probably would have already picked one but whatever) SOOO Kat and SOk could put in a few words and suggest Lil. PLUS that would also pretty much clinch the loyalty of Nuuk, since before they werent *clearly* NWT.
so, yup :D
hehe, my favorite line in this: 'he stroked the beard he'd been growing out'.. OH YEAH BABY! bearded sokky! hahah :D 'I can't, it is permanently glued to my face!'
:D
OH YES and I used the songs Have you Ever Really Loved a Woman [bryan adams] and They live in you/he lives in you [the lion king] for helaku's encouters :D
OMG only the epilouge left! wow! I can't believe it! Don't worry, I'll save all the sappiness for the last A/N :D
OH and I am about a third of the way through the epilouge. I think I'm gonna go back and fix everything first though... rewrite the zutara chapter. :)
translations -
Uitayok Opened eyes
(I'm not going through and finding any others. If they're there, they're not new. They're translated in one of the previous A/Ns :))
2 comments:
gooood chapter. i reallyyy liikeed it :) LIKE A LOT. LIKE OH MY GOD. sad its over.
thanks!! GAH i know, me too. like, I might cry. but maybe no. hahah. just one more chapter though. ACK. although you never know, i might go back and rewrite it all haha. sometimes I read it over and I'm like omg. so not cool. hahaha.
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